Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

Volume 2. 1938

Letter ID: 2194

Sri Aurobindo — Nirodbaran Talukdar

September 21, 1938

Guru, I’ve prepared myself for further smacks or whips!

Well, well – it doesn’t catch exactly – you haven’t put enough verbal or rhythmic vim into it. Lacks vitamin. Have put some vit. A and B into it. Some lines not lined because too much mine.

Oh dear, dear, what a travail to produce a mouse

The mouse was all right in intention, but its tail was not frisky enough in fact.