Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

CWSA 27

Fragment ID: 6597

Evaluations of 1934 – 1937 [9]

[after revision of line 7 to “For in that spacious revel glimmers through”]

There is nothing to be altered in what I said about the poem. It is a fine poem – in the first and third couplets exceedingly fine, perfect poetic expressions of what they want to say,– the other couplets are less inevitable, although the second lines in both are admirable. Line 2, lines 5, 6 are among the best you have written; they have a certain revelatory power.

17 October 1936