Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

CWSA 27

Fragment ID: 6790

On Two Translations of The Vedantin’s Prayer [2]

Kshitish Sen’s translation of the opening lines of the Vedantin’s Prayer are magnificently done. He has quite caught the tone of the original, its austerity and elevation of thought and feeling and severe restraint of expression with yet a certain massiveness of power in it,– these at least were what tried to come out when I wrote it, and they are all unmistakably and nobly there in his rendering. If he can complete it without falling from the high force of this opening, it will be a chef-d’oeuvre. I notice he has got the exactly corresponding verse movement also.

24 June 1932