Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

CWSA 27

Fragment ID: 6888

Comments on Specific Lines and Passages of the Poem [4]

A lonely splendour from the invisible goal

Almost was flung on the opaque Inane. [p. 4]

No word will do except “invisible”. I don’t think there are too many “l’s” – in fact such multiplications of a vowel or consonant assonance or several together as well as syllabic assonances in a single line or occasionally between line-endings (e.g. face – fate in the next instalment) are an accepted feature of the technique in Savitri. Purposeful repetitions also, or those which serve as echoes or key notes in the theme.

27 October 1936