Sri Aurobindo
Letters of Sri Aurobindo
CWSA 27
Fragment ID: 6901
Comments on Specific Lines and Passages of the Poem [17]
Almost they saw who lived within her light
The white-fire dragon-bird of endless bliss,
Her playmate in the sempiternal spheres
In her attracting advent’s luminous wake
Descended from his unattainable realms,
Drifting with burning wings above her days. [cf. p. 16]
I suppose the repetition of adjective and noun in four consecutive line-endings is meant to create an accumulating grandiose effect.
Yes; the purpose is to create a large luminous trailing repetitive movement like the flight of the Bird with its dragon tail of white fire.
Will you please say something about this bird?
What to say about him? One can only see.
4 November 1936