Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

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Fragment ID: 7003

Coleridge [2]

In Shelley’s Skylark my heart does not easily melt towards one simile –

Like a high-born maiden

In a palace-tower,

Soothing her love-laden

Soul in secret hour

With music sweet as love, which overflows her bower.

Sometimes I am inclined even to feel this is an atrocity. Then I wonder whether the sentimental stuff shouldn’t be cut out and replaced by something deeper although in Shelley’s style as much as possible – something like:

Like a child who wanders

In an ancient wood

Where the strange glow squanders

All its secret mood

Upon her lilting soul lost in that solitude.

The attempt to rewrite Shelley better than Shelley himself is a rash and hopeless endeavour. Your proposed stanza is twentieth century mysticism quite out of place in the Skylark and has not the simple felicity and magic and music of Shelley’s verse. I fail to see why the high-born maiden is an atrocity – it expresses the romantic attitude towards love which was sentimental and emotional, attempting to lift it out of the coarseness of life into a mental-vital idealism which was an attempt to resuscitate the attitude of chivalry and the troubadours. Romantic and unreal, if you like, but not atrocious.

8 November 1934