Sri Aurobindo
Letters of Sri Aurobindo
Travestied with a fortuitous sovereignty.1
I am unable to follow your criticism. I find nothing pompous or bombastic in the line unless it is the resonance of the word “fortuitous” and the many closely packed “t”s that give you the impression. But “fortuitous” cannot be sacrificed as it exactly hits the meaning I want. Also I fail to see what is abstract and especially mental in it. Neither a travesty nor sovereignty are abstract things and the images here are all concrete, as they should be to express 
the inner vision’s sense of concreteness of subtle things. The whole passage is of course about mental movements and mental powers, therefore about what the intellect sees as abstractions, but the inner vision does not feel them as that. To it mind has a substance and its energies and actions are very real and substantial things. Naturally there is a certain sense of scorn in this passage, for what the Ignorance regards as its sovereignty and positive truth has been exposed by the “sceptic ray” as fortuitous and unreal,
1948