Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

CWSA 27

Fragment ID: 7300

Some Questions of Diction [3]

I am reading what you wrote and shall send [it back] in a few days – it has merit, but the style needs chastening. English style cannot bear too much crowding of images as it creates a coloured mist and blurs the outline of the thought, the line of the thought has to be kept strong and clear, neither draped in too much diffuse wording nor blurred by excess of images. There are also some errors in the use of the language, but these are of less importance. If you read the best writers, observe their way of writing and absorb their influence, that might help you.

10 January 1936